When words replace action
music holds us like lovers
an approach without footprints
a reach without touch
how new to my heart
the distance dissolved
you're further away than a dream
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I’m calm. I’m Jenny. I’m nice. The best way to make a friend is to be one. I like that saying. When you like me, I like you more. When you figure that out, you’ll like me more or less. I write poems and true short stories. You’ll find them here. Welcome Lovers and Wreckers. xo
Jenny
Beautiful and simple Jenny Girl
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely dear. What happens when we begin to regret our dreams?
ReplyDeleteVery well done :)
ReplyDeleteAwww thats lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing and for being in my life! :***
I liked this.
ReplyDeleteWow, simply beautiful, chica!
ReplyDeleteThis speaks directly to me in this particular time. I find myself aroused and alive to an attraction that has nothing at all to do with flesh, presence, proximity. It has everything to do with written words. So there is a dreamlike quality to this feeling that lasts through each day. He makes me want to write erotica. You make me want to write my ferocity. Maybe I'll combine the two.
ReplyDelete"further away than a dream..."
ReplyDeleteI'm catching up on your poetry Jenny, with my morning coffee. that line tumbles through and I'm thinking a million miles into a distance that I can't know which way it came from or goes... just one line. my goodness. I like your work.
Great lines Jenny! Loving the absolute realization of words that have to replace actions... connected and unified by music! So true and so wonderful and fragile at the same time... as love often becomes ...
ReplyDeleteAnother one I like!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for sharing , Jen =)
You really inspire me to write again...
Reading your poems wakes up the muse
inside. I wish to share something w/ you
too one of these days =) *mwah*